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    #1

    A Poem

    I drink to to taste the night.
    Upon that stool; I fight,
    The shit goes down now,right?
    It's just, he gave me such a fright...

    I turned around and hit him, quite
    hard against the head, very bright!
    Here inside this cell, this light-
    headed feeling. Hear my plight?

    2005

    I write a lot when I'm sober or getting sober, never share much so I thought I'd share this one with all of you. I know that most of you aren't bar flies but I am/was/not wanting to be anymore!

    Better place to post poems?
    Full is not nearly as heavy as empty, my love...
    Not nearly. -Fiona Apple-
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    #2
    A Poem

    Poetry is a great way to express and release pent up feelings ... Very well written and thought provoking. Thank-You for sharing your poem and feel free to entertain us again... soon... Hugs, ~Niblet~

    ~ I hear a whinny on the wind~

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      #3
      A Poem

      Very cool ... thanks for sharing! .... and nice to meet you!

      ~Catt
      AF for two years. Slight relapse. Working on it at the moment.

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        #4
        A Poem

        Love poetry, reading, art - bring it on.

        I would love to hear more.... please?
        I feel as though it's all happening to someone right next to me.
        I'm close, I can feel it, I can hear it, but it isn't really me.

        Marilyn Monroe

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          #5
          A Poem

          I can't see the poem for the headlights...
          Control the Mind

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            #6
            A Poem

            well i almost didn't open this one,,, ughh, altho i do like poetry, do we need it to describe for our situation? it's usually too sappy, that's all.

            But NO, this was good... no sap here (can i say that?) just good shit. bring it on.
            Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life... And most important, have the courage to follow your heart and intuition. They somehow already know what you truly want to become. Everything else is secondary.

            Steve Jobs, Stanford Commencement Adress, 2005

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              #7
              A Poem

              Rocky, does that mean you are driving?
              Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life... And most important, have the courage to follow your heart and intuition. They somehow already know what you truly want to become. Everything else is secondary.

              Steve Jobs, Stanford Commencement Adress, 2005

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                #8
                A Poem

                beatle;166890 wrote: Rocky, does that mean you are driving?
                No..it means that when I look at "Deilight's" avitar, I can not see the poem... because her headlights are blinding me ...
                it's old humor...from when I was young...
                Control the Mind

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                  #9
                  A Poem

                  ok, i think i get it. you are definitely a hoot.
                  Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life... And most important, have the courage to follow your heart and intuition. They somehow already know what you truly want to become. Everything else is secondary.

                  Steve Jobs, Stanford Commencement Adress, 2005

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                    #10
                    A Poem

                    Stop looking at my hooters!!
                    Full is not nearly as heavy as empty, my love...
                    Not nearly. -Fiona Apple-

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                      #11
                      A Poem

                      oh dear, don't start them off Deilight!!
                      It always seems impossible until it's done....

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                        #12
                        A Poem

                        Another use of "hoot" for Beatle!


                        magic xxx :schmokin:
                        ~Are you looking for the Holy One?
                        I am in the next seat.
                        My shoulder is against yours. ~Kabir

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                          #13
                          A Poem

                          i am so chagrined (is that right use of the word?)... i was told a hoot meant TOO FUNNY, which is what i meant, of course-- about rocky, not about the poem, which is supposed to be the subject of this thread and it was really good, not a hoot and not sappy (gosh, hope i didn't misuse that word too!?)
                          Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life... And most important, have the courage to follow your heart and intuition. They somehow already know what you truly want to become. Everything else is secondary.

                          Steve Jobs, Stanford Commencement Adress, 2005

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                            #14
                            A Poem

                            Thanks Beatle!

                            The thread is about the poem, not my hooters! Think the word you want is "soppy"! I don't do soppy poetrly, I'm sopppy enough inside! Thanks for the compliments, if you guys really mean it I will post more. I haven't written in a while but feeling more inspired so maybe soon something new! A hoot is funny by the way.

                            Like your avatar! If I change mine, you think the boys will take me more seriously? Don't give a hoot!
                            Full is not nearly as heavy as empty, my love...
                            Not nearly. -Fiona Apple-

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