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    #16
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    Thanks for noticing, Much, that the poem was of positive tone. Maybe I will try to write sober.. thanks for the encouragement!
    FINALLY -- I'm a non-drinker!!

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      #17
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      MOW - I thought that about painting; I've only ever painted two that I felt were the 'long-lost' (hidden!) me and yes, I was p****d.............I love them but wondered if I could paint sober. But then I did one for my cousin's 50th (sober) and it was just as easy when I actually started it and it was just as good/free/bold. The only difference was that I ENJOYED DOING IT MORE!!!

      Please keep writing you two...........'Hidden' was amazing and spoke volumes... sadness but great hope... I wish we could hear the music on here too...but I hope my imagination is doing your poems justice!

      Love
      Finding xx
      :heart: c: :heart:
      "Be patient and gentle with yourself - the magic is in you."

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        #18
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        Nice one MOW!

        will go through some of my old stuff and put one of my originals on this thread too.

        Keep it up poets!

        x
        Full is not nearly as heavy as empty, my love...
        Not nearly. -Fiona Apple-

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          #19
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          The End

          When we sit one day, and lay it bare
          You and I, we'll be together there
          And all those days spent airless chatter-
          After all that, it was only clatter.
          Ringing loudly with each word
          Cutting through, whip-like sword.

          And as I flog you, you'll nail me
          And I'll open my arms out to that tree
          When I pass you then, the final breath
          Rest will come, slow, painful death
          Singing loudly, she-soul shall bellow
          To carry this cross, oh, how shallow!

          .................................................. ...................Dei 2000
          Full is not nearly as heavy as empty, my love...
          Not nearly. -Fiona Apple-

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            #20
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            your poems r all so good,it s a great way to express ,whats going thru the mind, love reading so keep em coming xxx

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              #21
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              What would life be if I were a tree....I could see all around me...feel all those that touch me...Feel anger to those that want to relieve themselves near me ! Yes what would life be if I were a tree! IAD
              ?Be who you are and say what you feel because
              those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.?
              Dr. Seuss

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                #22
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                OMG Delight...
                Don't have too many words for that...
                but don't let anyone crucify you, not even yourself!
                that was so beautifull....
                Mike...

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                  #23
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                  Nice one IAD! Cute.

                  Thanks Mike. I did write it a long time ago. Working on one today but not done. Will post soon..
                  Full is not nearly as heavy as empty, my love...
                  Not nearly. -Fiona Apple-

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