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    I was right about time,
    it tore us both apart.
    Won't help, but I'm still greaving,
    cause I know we fit the part.
    And I'll allways be willing,
    if you feel youl'd like to start!
    I guess I feel quite cheated,
    but I've only me to blame.
    I thought I could lose you to someone else,
    if he could lose you to me.
    I apreciate the choice you made,
    but for me it means only pain.
    So now I'm alone and I'm numb,
    Feeling alone and so dumb.
    I swear for a while the whole world was mine,
    when I thought that you loved me too.
    I placed your warm hand on my cheak,
    Hopeing that youl'd feel the tear.
    But the moment you touched me,
    I just couldn't cry,
    it was just you and me then that night.
    How do I allways misplace my efection?
    And get myself thrown in a sling!
    I'm loving and hurting,
    and now I can cry,
    but now your hand's far from my eye!


    One of my more personal ones....
    hope you like it..
    Mike...

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    I read that twice, its so sad. I hope you are okay. Bella xxx

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      I'm fine...just had a LOT of bad luck with love!
      Mike...

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        I have a feeling your luck is about to change... and it doesn't have all that much to do with luck, either. You are making positive changes in your life at a time of great personal pain. Positive changes will lead to positive "luck".
        Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life... And most important, have the courage to follow your heart and intuition. They somehow already know what you truly want to become. Everything else is secondary.

        Steve Jobs, Stanford Commencement Adress, 2005

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          Hey Mike that really touched a cord mate. Lost the love of my life through drinking, hope I don't lose my life as well as it eats up everything. That was really something, I can relate to every word and emotion in it. Hope your doing O.K, hang in there. Kimbo
          Yesterday I dared to struggle. Today I dare to win!!

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            Mike,,, buddy,,, I think that with you sharing your raw, painful emotions you've had in the past is helping you to reflect and look once again at where you were... I guess what I mean is, sometimes it is good to get someone elses take on things as well as your own... I think that you are doing a bang-up job with your writing, and would love for you to keep sharing with the rest of us... I honestly think that it may be one of your true passions, and this is very thereputic for you as well... Very good stuff all around.. We all come out as winners in this !!! Thanks once again for sharing your gift.

            ~ I hear a whinny on the wind~

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              Hi Mike,

              That's a lovely poem.

              If it doesn't ever work out with the special girl you wrote it for, maybe it can be a lesson for the next time you give your heart.

              Wishing you all the best, Jas xx
              :thanks: :h

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                That was so sad, but beautiful!

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                  Hi Mike. I think many of us have had bad luck with love, I have been single about 12 years! Of course drinking destroys relationships we all know that.

                  Once you do the work on yourself, and get the drinking demon off your back...maybe another special girl will come your way. Dont give up!
                  I LOVE MY SEROTONIN AND BOOZE SCREWS IT UP!!!!!

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