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    #1

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    I
    a thin vertabrae of light
    transient
    but always ploughing
    likend to the uprooted hearts of lovers
    exposed to knowing
    yet..
    suggestive of distance
    remote !
    am i
    floating beyond containment
    a, lean birth awaits me
    heralding that brillance of aloneness
    the
    voiceless embracement
    liquid enough to engulf
    fateless,inaudible
    this begining
    a,
    continuance absent from ancestory
    yet...
    subscribed to perpetual renewal
    gathering and reforming
    to...
    welcome, my finaliity
    my movement
    a god , ....... without pause (jl08)
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    #2
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    SOOOO POETIC....
    sigpicEyes on the PRIZE, a SOBER Future !!!

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      #3
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      Thanks Jay love it
      Cap

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        #4
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        Hi Jay, you are truly talented. Are you published yet? If not you should submit this.
        Wolf Dreamer

        P.S. I guess I should change my avitar eh?:new:

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          #5
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          From Camolot: " I am good Kight Sir Lanceolot, I like to sing and dance a lot..........
          ?Be who you are and say what you feel because
          those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.?
          Dr. Seuss

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            #6
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            im not really into poetry. .but i can say that you're good. .you're too good ..that ..i couldn't understand the twist of the words.. haha.. too deep ..
            Believe that you can recover and be healthy
            keep yourself fit

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              #7
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              very nice
              Patience has its limits. Take it too far, and it's cowardice.
              - George Jackson

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                #8
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                Jay, I like your poems-- interesting, thought-provoking. I wonder if you might want to title them? Some people purposely don't give their poems titles and others use titles as a sort of hint or indication about the poem's subject matter or theme, or just as a way to pique the readers' interest. I wonder what your poem would have been titled if you did give it one?
                Your time is limited, so don't waste it living someone else's life... And most important, have the courage to follow your heart and intuition. They somehow already know what you truly want to become. Everything else is secondary.

                Steve Jobs, Stanford Commencement Adress, 2005

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                  #9
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                  As always I enjoy your poetry... Thank you for sharing the gift you have xxx and a

                  ~ I hear a whinny on the wind~

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