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[jay42]

i wrote this , in response to all the terrbile stabbings.killings that are happening in london right now , and which have happened near me ie my area ....
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somehow
deep down we need to unlock the "myth" of us
panic stricken,hurt and hunted
abandoned by the impossible,inexpressible
for surely our hands should be busy
trying to polish off the tarnish of our own tiny resplendent sun
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yet
what of those still overwhelmed
where god grew inwards sprouting another face
hissing wickedly
...ragged bundle of souls
lunging wildly
we are all ears now
but.........
before? (jl)

[Captnjack]

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Thanks jay for the poem....... we got a major knife problem here too....... I despair at the world my daughter will have to deal with eventually on her own.
Love your mate

[IAD]

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JAY,
It makes me think about problems that are inevidable in my life. My mother is'nt well and elderly, my sister has Rum. Arthritice with amune problems due to meds. ( She's not married, thier is my brother who could help too,) Problems never seem to end. Yet we have to keep sober ! IAD! Thanks for shareing...

[Niblet]

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As always Jay I thank-you for sharing your talent my friend, xxx

[happydog]

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Hi JaY
Thanks for sharing your poem with us.....

We have a problem with teenages carring knifes with them. I worry if my son goes to the saturday market , i woud of thought it would be a night club. (not that he goes, to young.) But this happens with teenages in day light stubbings, in markets now!

Take Care
Love
Teardrop.x

[tea]

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Thanks for that Jay, it is something on all of our minds here in the UK. Seems to be almost weekly now, it beggars belief.

Lx