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[jay42]

hi,
wrote this poem today it helps to get my feelings out .... on low alocohl cider today so that ok i guess .

DEUX

a
pebble skips beyond the waters edge
so, too our lives are thrown
jumping over every hurdle that confronts us
where ..
we catch,create
and
finally discover each other
(jl 07)

[Breez]

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Nice Jay!

Hope you're feeling better. Take care of yourself today. Do me a favor and throw some water in there too-ok?

Stay strong, we're here for you.

[YoungAtHeart]

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Very moving, Jay--I like it a lot!

[irishlady]

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Liked the poem Jay, have you written any more?? Hope you are ok today..

[Popeye]

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Jay,
:l

[weemelonhead]

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Bless you Jay......have a healthy day my friend.......

The ship in your avatar reminds me of when I was about 6 I think, and my family went for a day on the Ark Royal with my step father who was serving on this at the time.....the minimelon was sick as a pig all day, and apparently screamed like a pig when she boarded the boat as she thought it was too big to float......Although I LOVE the water now, I am a looker and a swimmer rather than a sailor........

Love to you Mister
Weemelon xxx

[Guest]

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Very nice jay, Every time I see your avitar. I think of fighting a battle, we both are we will win
Smiles
mar

[Bella]

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thats a beautiful poem.

[Popeye]

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Hi simeybear
I feel the same when I see your avatar

[Guest]

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Popeye, thank you so much for the compliment on my avitar. I think she /I have an air of mystery to us.
Smile
Mar