Hi,
I read your earlier poem, and it was wonderful and thought provoking. I love poetry and write alot, well, sometimes I do, then usually I think it's a load of crap and stop for a while, but then when it's in you, you can't help but have the odd blob, as I call it, it just has to get out,
I wrote this one a little while ago, was on it, thinking about the shit going on in the world, and thought I had the answer, lol, but I hope you like it.
Finding Peace
Peace has hidden itself
Only love can find it
But where did love go?
Did we put it behind us
In the rush to get further
Did we leave it behind us?
Can we all turn around
Pick it up where we left it
Put it back in it's place
And never forget it?
And then like a lantern
We could carry it around
Then next thing we'd know
Peace would be found.
Happy Belated Birthday Jay, Hope all is well with you over there.
Love Jas xx
I read your earlier poem, and it was wonderful and thought provoking. I love poetry and write alot, well, sometimes I do, then usually I think it's a load of crap and stop for a while, but then when it's in you, you can't help but have the odd blob, as I call it, it just has to get out,
I wrote this one a little while ago, was on it, thinking about the shit going on in the world, and thought I had the answer, lol, but I hope you like it.
Finding Peace
Peace has hidden itself
Only love can find it
But where did love go?
Did we put it behind us
In the rush to get further
Did we leave it behind us?
Can we all turn around
Pick it up where we left it
Put it back in it's place
And never forget it?
And then like a lantern
We could carry it around
Then next thing we'd know
Peace would be found.
Happy Belated Birthday Jay, Hope all is well with you over there.
Love Jas xx
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