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    #1

    An Ode or Two..just for fun...!

    Hello!

    I am feeling like getting back in touch with my creative side.. thought maybe there might be others out there who would too..or just for a laugh..make up some nonsence...so here goes....

    Ode To Ode

    Here I am...rhyming, cause I can
    it aint no rap..
    dont you dare give me that!

    I've got a tale to spin..
    a story to tell..
    about a girl and her date with hell..

    She started out all innocent,
    like the first time...
    a shiney new dime!

    Then she fell,a long way down
    that deep,dark place...
    that lonely place!

    Now she's looking up,
    where the sun does shine....
    waiting for someone else to add a rhyme......????????????????
    (Chicken's bit-please add on!):H
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    #2
    An Ode or Two..just for fun...!

    The skies are blue
    and the sun shines through
    I am awake, excited to be alive
    For this, I have always strived

    Everything I need is within me!

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      #3
      An Ode or Two..just for fun...!

      There once was a man from Nantucket ....

      AF for two years. Slight relapse. Working on it at the moment.

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        #4
        An Ode or Two..just for fun...!

        .....Who drank out of a bucket
        When the grog was gone
        He stayed up til dawn
        Wishing that he had stayed on Nantucket

        Everything I need is within me!

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          #5
          An Ode or Two..just for fun...!

          I'm no poet, but this is fun! Ha!

          Everything I need is within me!

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            #6
            An Ode or Two..just for fun...!

            This was something I wrote a month or two ago.

            You were loving, caring and gentle
            You made me feel safe
            And I gazed upon you with wide blue eyes.

            I was a child
            Yearning to be loved
            And spend every waking moment with you
            For fear I would loose you
            I loved you

            You were a ****, a **** and a *******
            I told you so
            And I gazed upon you with hatred in my eyes

            I was a broken man
            Still yearning as a child
            But lost in my addiction
            I fuck'n hated you

            Today I'm a man in touch with his inner child
            Spiritually sound
            And free from the obsession.

            Although you are no longer with me
            In spirit you are
            and I love you

            I love you dad.
            "Keep me away from the wisdom which does not cry, the philosophy which does not laugh and the greatness which does not bow before children." Kahlil Gibran
            Clean and sober 25th January 2009

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              #7
              An Ode or Two..just for fun...!

              Nantucket...that sounds like a bucket!
              I have no eloquent words to say
              I am so sorry to say........(whose next?)

              (Hippie-Your poem needs no rhyme..it speaks of itself!I had a Dad who was hard to love too!(gone 4yrs now!)
              Chicken

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                #8
                An Ode or Two..just for fun...!

                But gosh I miss him!
                The song Danny Boy...is all about memories of him!
                Chicken

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                  #9
                  An Ode or Two..just for fun...!

                  Very heartfelt Hippie

                  Everything I need is within me!

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